Scholarship Essay Guide

Master the Basics.  Pay attention to details for a high quality essay

Get Organized.  Brainstorm to generate some good ideas and then create an outline to help you get started.

Demonstrate originality and creativity.  To catch the attention of a panel of scholarship judges, find a hook that will get the reader interested right away.

Show, don't tell.  For example, if you're describing an activity you participated in, don't describe it in general terms.  Be specific!  What duties did you perform?  What affect did it have on your life or the lives of others?

Develop a theme that fits the scholarship.  What sort of student is the sponsor looking for?  Include elements in you essay that complement the sponsor's expectations (without pretending to be someone you aren't).

Turn in a professional-looking essay.  Write a second draft to catch mistakes and better organize your thoughts.  If possible, type and doublespace your essay.  Check spelling and  grammar.  Also, share your essay with friends, family or teachers for another  proofread.

WHAT DO JUDGES LOOK FOR?

Make it past the first round by following these simple rules:

- Do you qualify?  Sounds simple, but students waste time every year by applying for awards they aren't eligible to win.  If you don't qualify, don't enter the contest.

- Is your application presented well?  Type your essay.  Messy handwriting and excessive scratch-outs could land your application in the trash.

- Did you include all required documents?  Required docs frequently left out of an application include: transcripts,  photos, references and a letter of recommendation.

- Did you answer all the questions?  Double-check that you haven't forgotten any required information.

I don't know what to write about!
Take the intimidation out of writing essays by turning your achievements, goals, and interests into topic essays:

Personal achievements

- Remember to personalize your experience.  For example, what makes the volunteer and community service you've performed unique?

- Do you still keep in touch with anyone  you've helped?

- Talk about specifice interactions you may have had with others.  How did you influence their lives?

- How did your achievements reflect your values?  Why are your achievements important to you? 

- Remember that judges want to hear from you as a person, not your resume.

Academic Plans and Possible Major

- Instead of saying, "Math is my favorite subject," discuss a specific assignment or project that you worked on tha tsparked your interest.

- Avoid saying that you selected a major or career path to "help people."  What specific actions can you take to improve the lives of others?  Discuss specific values or ideas you want to develop once you get to college.

Background Influences

- Is there a person you wish to emulate with your chosen major or career path?  Someone who encouraged you to succeed?  Focus on teh specific or actions that the person has inspired in you.

- Think about your friends and family, community, and the things you've learned outside of the classroom.  Pick specific people, incidents and learning experiences to write about that will let your personality show through.

Current Events and Social Issues

- Think about current issues or events in the news htat yu feel strongly about.

- Do you know a lot about a controversial topic?

- Do you know of someone who is directly involved in an issue who might be able to provide insight?

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